THE BEACH
Tell me
Show me
Tell me more
Show me more
Your face came from behind the clouds
And Showed me a hint of your Blue Paradise.
Let me hear the music of your laughter to the beat of your heart.
Tell me
Show me
Tell me more
Show me more
Smile with me, let me discover you
When I stand amazed in the sand and the sun and the moon.
Kiss the salt spray on my face, and look away before I catch your eye
Tell me
Show me
Tell me more
Show me more
Hold my hand, hold my heart ?
dano
posted by VERBPOWER @ 7:34 AM
3 comments
3 Comments:
Enjoy your poetry. The Touch expressed delicate passion encompassed in love. This one stirred up more of a yearning, a need for more intimacy, more knowledge, more spirituality(?)
Simple, succinct elegance in your prose. Look forward to the next.
Totally beautiful....suggests a hidden passion artfully camouflaged with sophistication.
Keep it up Senor Dano!
Nadine ;-)
Senor Dano, you have a power with the verbs!!!!
Si, si!
N ;-)
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